Add missing dialogue in Candy

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Jay Logan 2019-10-28 03:27:28 -05:00
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</div>
<p class="no-indent">Did he hear her right? He cant imagine she
could <em>possibly</em> mean...</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="calliope">CALLIOPE: gamzee.</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Calliope puts her hands together and pulls
back, smiling sweetly. Her voice is sugar-sweet again.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">

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</div>
<p class="no-indent">Dave gives him a light bro-punch in the arm
and tries to smile.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="dave">DAVE:enjoy your date</p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
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worst fears.</p>
<p>But his worst fears are confirmed for him without him having to
do anything, unfortunately, which seems par for the course.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jane">JANE: Good morning.</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Jane sits up in the bed and stretches her arms
over her head. Her body is a perfect hourglass in naked profile.
Jakes eyes trace the curve of her spine against his will. They
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Lollipop on his bedside table. It sits, like evidence at a murder
scene, beneath an empty bottle of vodka and far more sets of
underwear than the number of people accounted for in the room.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jake">JAKE: Um...</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">...Jake says, but Jane shuts him up with a
finger over his lips. She slides into his lap and settles her
bottom into the space between his thighs. Theres a blanket between
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<p class="no-indent">Jane stares up at him, her eyes so bright
theyre practically clear, like tropical water on a sunny day. She
looks like girls do right before theyre about to cry.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jane">JANE: Jake...</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Oh, how could he deny her anything?</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jake">JAKE: What was i even saying? Im being terribly
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<p class="no-indent">Its not the most rousing speech Jake has ever
given, but it seems satisfactory enough for Jane. He releases a
tremendously relieved sigh when Jane breaks into a smile.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jane">JANE: Oh, Jake!</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">He flails when she kisses him. But this time,
theres no doubt he hasnt said no.</p>
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<p class="no-indent">Still no answer. Dave lets himself in. Its
not like his bro would actually mind. Theyre family, after
all.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="dave">DAVE: bro</p>
<p class="dave">DAVE: hey</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Silence throughout the studio. Dave starts
flitting from room to room, checking for any signs of Dirk.</p>
<p>This is strange. The guy doesnt usually go out to do things,

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<p>John sneezes.</p>
<p>Dave and Karkat jump apart like opposing magnets.</p>
<p>Oops.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="john">JOHN: uhh, hi guys!</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">John waves dopily and hopes that he doesnt
look as buffoonish and mortified as he feels. Dave and Karkat are
still staring at each other from the corners of their eyes, warily.

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ringer for her old Witch of Space uniform. Jade touches the body
with the toe of her shoe, and then gasps when it rolls over to
reveal its face.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jade">JADE: its...</p>
<p class="jade">JADE: ME???</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Karkat and Dave stick their heads over the
edge of the pit.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">

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Makara-Crocker is at her side, serving as her ever-faithful shadow,
holding her arm to steady her as she tries to revive teen-Jades
corpse.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jane">JANE: Jake!</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Vitriol leaks from every letter of his name.
John and Dave exchange a knowing look: whos supposed to be the
kismesis here, again?</p>
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are standing shoulder to shoulder, very much in stable, devoted,
interspecies Love. Kanaya catches that gaze, and holds it, for a
very long, tense moment.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jane">JANE: Um. Roxy...</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Kanaya interrupts, tone clipped and dry.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="kanaya">KANAYA: Perhaps We Should Not Talk About That

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<p class="no-indent">It takes the corpse a while to reply. Everyone
waits for her to speak. When the words leave her mouth, they send a
chill through the cathedral air.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="calliope-dead">JADE: i am not jade.</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Slowly, Jade raises her head. The stage makeup
Roxy applied earlier is running down her face in dark rivers. Her
eyes are solid black. Even more than black, it seems. They are

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<p class="no-indent">She twitches her dog-ears and raises her face.
Her mouth is a neutral line, but her eyes are burning
furiously.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jade">JADE: i heard everything</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">The two of them stare at each other for a long
time. John isnt sure how hes supposed to read this moment. He
used to know Jade better than he knew anyone, but in recent years
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</div>
<p class="no-indent">John and Jade stop. There is another shadow
cast in the doorway. A much darker one.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jane">JANE: Excuse me.</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">She says in a sugar-sweet voice.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jane">JANE: But what the FUCK is going on in here?!</p>
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edge of the door. Everyone else is clustered around the doorway.
Jade stares at John with a dark expression. After a beat of
silence, Harry Anderson starts crying.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="john">JOHN: i... i...</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Roxy wont meet his eyes. Dave wont either.
John turns to Tavros, opens his mouth to apologize, but the kid
just ducks deeper into the closet, trembling.</p>

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<p class="no-indent">The meteor is passing beyond the fall of
night. Dead-Jade, standing half in light, half in darkness, looks
up at the sky.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="calliope-dead">JADE: not soon enough.</p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
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get used to, living hand-to-mouth inside a cave. Its that
persistent fucking leak directly above his desk that is driving him
to distraction.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="karkat">KARKAT: SWIFER!</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Swifer Eggmop pokes her head into the
chamber.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">

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horns and distinctive shoulder-hunch. Of course.</p>
<p>John snorts back his tears and jaunts forward with a jolly
wave.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="john">JOHN: hi, karkat!</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Karkat blinks and looks up, startled out of
his thoughts. Hes grown gaunt since John last saw him in real
life. In his Alternian military fatigues, and his admittedly
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elegant bound. John watches him rappel down the cliffside until he
disappears beneath the precipice shadows. Wow. Karkat grew up to be
kind of cool. Who would have guessed?</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="dave">DAVE: no john dont do it</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">John spins on his heel to see Dave in the
doorway, holding a bottle of champagne. He looks smart in his
three-piece tux, but hes still sporting the same old Stiller
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picture is still in his wallet: faded, dog-eared, marred by ragged
white lines down the center from being folded and unfolded so many
times, deep enough to be called valleys at this point.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="john">JOHN: right.</p>
<p class="dave">DAVE: right</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">They fall silent for a moment, soaking up the
atmosphere, sipping their booze, contemplating the suckiness of
being an adult. Dave lets out a soft laugh and slaps John on the

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crater and peers through the smoke.</p>
<p>He recognizes the ghost immediately, because he sees a younger
version of her almost every day.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="john">JOHN: vriska?</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Vriskas face snaps up, eyes blazing. Eyes.
Actual eyes, with expression, color, pupils, and everything.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">

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<p class="no-indent">Janes eyes rake up and down Gamzees body,
like shes carefully considering her response. Her face is
expressionless when she answers.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jane">JANE: Begone, clown.</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Jane turns, and waves the security away. The
uniformed men drag Gamzee from the bridge. The sound of honks
reverberate hauntingly through the halls as the wretched jester is

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a wheezy, guttered honk. It comes out slowly, mournfully, like a
broken bike horn getting backed over by the rear wheel of a
hearse.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="vriska">(VRISKA): EVVVVVVVVER</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">She spins out from under his flailing arm and
does a full 360-degree pirouette off the fucking handle to deliver
a ruthless Knife Chop straight to the cartilage at the center of

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and honest. Her eyes are perfectly clear. There is no other word
that could possibly do justice to her expression. She looks
happy.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="rose">ROSE: Thank you.</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">She comes forward to give him a kiss on the
cheek. John wraps his arms around her shoulders, pulls her into a
tight hug, and breathes in the scent of her hair. Whatever the

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tangled black hair, and stunned faces, her expression begins to
slowly melt. It then drifts quickly, from phase to phase, to one of
wonder, then anguish, and finally, abject horror.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="john">JOHN: oh god.</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Vriska and (Vriska) both start shrieking at a
pitch Johns only ever heard one time before. It was a sound that
once accompanied the end of everything. A sound once heard the

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backs up a few steps, studying the corpse. If her body language
signals any remorse or sadness, the witness in the bushes certainly
cant tell.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="vriska">Vriska: (Eep!)</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Oh shit. (Vriska) had already forgotten about
her, somehow. Her stylishly dressed teen duplicate, who surely just
witnessed not only the original feat of debauchery, but all the
compromising activity which followed as well. (Vriska) would
probably need to have a few words with her.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="vriska">Vriska: Um...</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Vriska stands up slowly from the bush,
obviously trying not to look at the lifeless clown. She puts a hand
behind her head and seems to be casting about desperately for the

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dozes off to a lullaby of distant sonic booms.</p>
<p>When next hes jostled awake, its by a figure that looks
uncomfortably like—</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="john">JOHN: dad?</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">As John blinks away the sleep from his eyes,
the man looming over him comes into focus. Its not his dad—its
Jake Crocker. Who actually is his dad, but in a far more
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like being dashed with a bucket of ice water, though. All of Johns
gloom and malaise surges back to the fore like air filling a
vacuum. He feels hungover.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="john">JOHN: oof...</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">John lies immobile on the floor tile. Jake
draws up to look down at him in confusion, striking a pose that is
both dazzlingly modelesque and doubtlessly completely

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</div>
<p class="no-indent">He runs a hand through his hair, and looks
back down.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="dave">DAVE: i think im gay</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Obama purses his lips in that trademark way of
his—thoughtful, serious, contemplative. He nods slowly, letting the
silence grow, as if considering precisely how to deliver the most

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<p>Wait, this doesnt seem right, she thinks. When she closed her
eyes, she was dramatically lingering about her bedroom at home.
Shed just taken a handful of pills, and said goodbye to...</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="rose">ROSE: John!</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">She shoots up in bed, tugging the IV taped
under her elbow. Kanaya is sitting at her bedside, hemming a
sundress. She thins her lips and gives Rose a half-lidded look.</p>
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fixed on the window at the other end of the room. The night is
dying behind the thin, pale curtain. She can barely see the
moon.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="rose">ROSE: I feel...</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">She looks back to Kanaya, eyes wide and
bright.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">

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<p>She holds her thoughts. They can wait, and theres much to
discuss. She taps a button, and lowers her head a little closer to
a mic on the panel.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="rose">ROSEBOT: Dirk.</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">She supplies a courtesy pause, as if waiting
for him to reply. He usually doesnt.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">

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his chest. She bounces them there a few times, enjoying the way
troll skin is just a bit thicker than human skin, taut like the
membrane over a poorly maintained drum.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jade">JADE: a husband....</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">She begins walking her fingers up the length
of Karkats sternum. Karkat knows damned well what a husband is.
Hes been force-fed enough bad movies from Dave to pick up any
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<p>It would be pretty easy to mistake his reaction for arousal, so
its understandable that Jade is extremely surprised when Karkat
snaps his jaw shut and chomps down on her hand.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jade">JADE: OW!!!!</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">She flies back, literally, spiraling up
towards the ceiling so fast that her skirt puffs up and she gets
all tangled in her clothes for a few seconds. She clutches her
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</div>
<p class="no-indent">Jade pinches his ear and twists hard, smiling
pleasantly.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jade">JADE: get fucked karkat</p>
</div>
</div>
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corporate bailouts?</p>
<p>Well, Jane thinks with a heavy sigh, now that shes not running
for president, it doesnt really matter, does it?</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jane">JANE: Jake?</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Jane feels rather like a princess in an
animated film with the way her voice echoes up three flights of
circular staircase. The mansion is dark and cramped—tall, narrow
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face. His eyes are so green, and theyre glittering with naked
adoration, for her. Its all for her. He nudges a knuckle under her
chin and tips her face towards him.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jake">JAKE: Jane...</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Hes so close that Jane thinks he might kiss
her. She shuts her eyes and lets his husky wine-breath wash over
her face.</p>
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<p>But Jake doesnt register her mortification or frustration
either. He just keeps smiling and gazing into her eyes, warm and
drunk.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="jane">JANE: Well, then.</p>
</div>
<p>With a deep sigh, Jane shoves Jake off of her and stumbles back
to where his horrendous-tasting wine is stored. She pops open a
bottle of briny-smelling moscato and tips it back—this embarrassing

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like a rock on the outside, but has a layer beneath like mulched
flesh. Kanayas hands are soaked blue with bloody yolk when she
finally lifts the grub and holds it up to the light.</p>
<div class="chat type-rg type-hs-small--md">
<p class="kanaya">KANAYA: Rose Look</p>
</div>
<p class="no-indent">Rose looks. All troll grubs appear kind of
samey, but this one has a familiar look about her. Asymmetric
horns, one crescent, the other harpoon-like. A mussed mane of hair

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